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Cold, unforgiving, lifeless

That what it is

Not bright like a sunny sky


No bluebirds singing tunes today

Just the sound of violins

And a lonely heart

Breaking at the sound


Used to be of laughter

Used to be of love

Used to be a blanket to keep us warm


It was your clothes

It was your life

It was your smell


It was perfect

It was all we needed

It was all we had


It was the color of your lifeless lips

It was the color of your open eyes

It was the color of my tears when I cried


It was what had you

It was what took you

It was what killed you


I miss you

I love you

Come back


Then I wouldn't be so...


Blue.
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~ArcoIris-Gato Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this one.
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~BBsevolEAR Dec 3, 2012  Student
Oh shit, this is deep. O.O
Teach me your poetic ways. (bows repeatedly in your awesome-ness)
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~SonicScrewdriverDD3 Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*Basks in it for a bit* Patience my little grasshopper, your master will teach you soon.
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~BBsevolEAR Dec 3, 2012  Student
Yes, master. :)
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~RedReception Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Poems aside, colours, used as representations of the human emotion, is strange when given enough thought.

Through smart use of repetition, this poem embeds into my mind a strong seed, a fraction of the emotion in which the speaker must be feeling. Thus making the poem's saddening story linger which I find the most important thing. Things that linger are things that are great.
And this poem was great.
Stay awesome.
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